This pic is a bit busy. Maybe a bit more emphasis on the subjects is needed. You could also try some other technique to bring out the fact that it is raining, maybe a slower shutter or something. Nice try however.
This has potential. The kids are a bit too small in the frame for the viewer to really connect. What I like more is the composition formed by all the verticals---the pavilion supports, the building supports and the doors. If the focus was sharper and the color a bit more saturated I think I might really like this.
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