This photograph definitely pulls at the heartstrings. It is a beautiful collection of memories. The only thing I would change is to crop just a bit differently to where you can't see the desk drawer, it's a bit distracting. 9 lecalan
I find the corner of the wall and the space to the bottom right of the picture distracting. I also think a color other than white for the background would have been an improvement. The pen is also out of place, it looks too modern. Wonderful idea though, I like the way you laid everything out.
Great idea. Nice focus and clarity. I like the arrangement of the items, but maybe more effective in a different way. I'm not sure I like the papermate pen. Problem is the table and the white boards or walls - they don't go. Also, I think the white balance is off and the lighting is a bit too much. Perhaps changing the DOF would make this more effective - or a different angle. This is my opinion - not to offend. 5 Ruthann
Something old. Use your photographic technique to emphasize the age of your subject. Composition - quite good Technical Aspects - very good Meets Challenge - yes Visual Impact / Originality - high
Very nice idea, but the modern pen really throws it off. The letter hasn't been folded, it seems, and I don't think three-hole punch paper was very prevalent. Cleaning up some of these out of place elements would make this work much better, I think.
Excellent. I don't think it get's any better than this. I have had many relatives who fought in WW2, and I have studied it in detail myself. This is as good as any published work of the same style.
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