The pose in this pic is very nice. There are just two things that breaks it down a little. First the seam of the material used as a hood. I think it would have been nicer if it was folded back. Secondly for me the left eye gets lost. I would have liked a bit more light from the front just to put a sparkle in there. But that is just me. Nice shot.
this really needs the crispness of a librodo shot, to make it work. a sharpening of it's edges and application of neat image to smooth the skin would really round out this image.
Nice idea, great lighting! I don't like the coarse leizure of the cloth. Perhaps you should have folded the border of the cloth to receive a smooth edge.
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