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10/06/2006 04:24:37 PMPost actions
*Greeting from Critique Club*
Hi, I think that this is a good image and in an another contest I think it would have a better rating. The image is a macro but isn't abstract (some users in his comment tell this and I think that is true), this is the only problem that it have.
Best regards and good luck in next contest
Gennaro
Comments Made During the Challenge
10/01/2006 10:04:39 PMPost actions
wow!!!!!!! your lens must be powerful!
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09/29/2006 12:30:15 AMPost actions
Very nice!
A suggestion for improvement: Perhaps if you'd left the trail of ink towards the rear... I noticed a very shallow DOF - the ink trail (a.k.a the written curved or wiggly line) would have dissipated in the background because of such DOF. Anyway, I like it even as such.
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09/28/2006 08:09:03 AMPost actions
very cool. love the detail.
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09/28/2006 07:33:14 AMPost actions
Interesting and technically well performed but hardly abstract
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09/28/2006 06:41:07 AMPost actions
great detail, perhaps lacks the abstract aspect
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09/26/2006 10:15:56 PMPost actions
nice macro, but not abstract enough
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09/26/2006 07:12:26 PMPost actions
Love the detail on even the ball of the pen! I can't seen that with my eyes, that's for sure!
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09/26/2006 05:13:18 PMPost actions
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09/26/2006 01:34:47 AMPost actions
poor pen looks like it's out of ink...a line would have been interesting. this is a nice, crisp shot, though, with good comp.
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09/25/2006 07:04:18 PMPost actions
Nicely done. Very close and very sharp.
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09/25/2006 10:06:00 AMPost actions
when you put a title that tells us what it is it takes the fun out of the abstactness of the picture.
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09/25/2006 08:32:02 AMPost actions
This is a great macro but I am not sure it is abstract.
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09/25/2006 12:56:03 AMPost actions
Good image but, to easy to see what it is.....
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