For what its worth here's my opinion on your pencils..
Nice choice of colours and the position of the pencils in the frame is good. I'd like to see what the shot looks like in 'landscape' format rather than portrait as for some reason I keep tilting my head to look at this! A good use of selective focus and the DOF helps with your attempt to make the subject 'abstract'. The lighting on the underside of the bottom pencil doesn't seem quite right to me and is a little distracting as it doesnt 'match' that of the topside.
The use of DOF in this is excellent and probably couldn't of placed the point of max focus any better. The colors used really makes this very eye fetching. Great job!