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Comments Made During the Challenge
09/26/2006 11:45:15 AMPost actions
This is nice how the straw leads right up to the lips, my eyes just naturally followed.
09/25/2006 10:23:01 PMPost actions
Nice photo I think it would be better if model and straw were in focus but I know thats hard so I am still giving you a TEN!
09/23/2006 01:20:06 AMPost actions
Why isn't the straw going anywhere? I like the composition especially the DOF but the straw should go somewhere.
09/20/2006 10:41:03 PMPost actions
great choice in crop and composition.
09/20/2006 02:58:47 PMPost actions
I think I would of liked this with the focus reversed...the end of the straw leading me to the mouth.
09/20/2006 02:42:37 PMPost actions
09/20/2006 09:21:03 AMPost actions
Well done. I like the DOF. The area to the left of her neck - probably a collar- detracts somewhat but her face is in perfect focus and I like the different approach.
09/20/2006 08:59:48 AMPost actions
very strong image. almost wish the straw weren't the "bendy" kind.
09/20/2006 08:27:31 AMPost actions
really interesting and creative image...perhaps the lighting isn't great, but nice comp
09/20/2006 05:27:24 AMPost actions
Maybe it's just me but I think this needs a deeper DOF. My eye is not so much drawn into the image by the lines, but goes straight to the lips as that is the obvious focal point.
09/20/2006 01:05:10 AMPost actions