Your photography is fortunately better than your spelling :) I have a weakness for guitar photos, and I like this one a lot. I like that the guitar is the focus, and the guitarist fading to blur.
Good use of tone to create the effect you have with the background blending with her pants (I'll need to view at home on calibrated monitor). Her placement in this gives a sense of motion, like she's walking out of the image. To me that's a good thing in this scenario, although many will argue that your subject should have space to "move into". Good luck in the challenge.
It's a very nice photo but the model looks anything but having an 'electric personality'. imho, she looks like she's bored to tears even though she is holding an electric guitar.
Very nice, but half the subject is a little out of focus. You may of dont this on purpose to give the electric guitar the focal point. But I would have prefered all in focus. Why did you chop the top of the guitar off?