Good use of leading line but the lines should lead to the subject. Being out of focus, the subject is hard for me to look at. Girl should be in focus with leading line soft at right edge.
Seems to me that *something* should be in good focus here, preferably the girl since that's what I'm drawn to. As it is, I don't really know what I'm supposed to be looking at. It may have made for an excellent shot had you physically moved over to the right (getting rid of the white blob of stuff at the end of the bridge) with the lines leading to the girl.
great composition. I might find this easier to look at if something were in focus, but at the same time I kind of like that I can just make out the child's form, it makes her seem more universal. 7
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