looks ok except on just the bridge of the nose here(little too much light there). would like some light in the eyes though. cool pose. kinda edgy. i like that.
You're doing great. Don't fret. This one is very appealing. Lighting is not so bad it can't be processed in several possible directions. Hang in there. :)
Yeah I wouldn't say it is too light at all I really like it, especially your big brown eyes. I do agree with Judi that if you moved a step or two over to one side the lighting would be just a hair better, but its not that noticeable.