Wow you should have seen my set up for this! wax paper covered lights (thanks joey lawrence for the idea), foil reflectors and a white sheet I would have loved to do this in a class room setting but couldn't unfortunately
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I love the idea, but I think you over did it on the mascara, or eye shadow or whatever it was. Try sharping it also. Good try though. You might want to try this one again.
Interesting aprouch, different from everything I have seen so far.
The background is to white, it draws to much attention to it. Perhaps a white background isn't the right choice if she's supposed to be in a classroom ?
The test might be a little bit brighter though and her face, but that's perhaps just because of the bright background.