You are excellent as this self portrait stuff! I really like your pose,position in the frame, choice of background and editing on this shot. They all come together nicely here to create a pleasing to the eye image :o)
I think this is a great start - I like the composition - and the downward glance - I wish the background wasn't so distracting - would be better for me if the background was more blurred out. Look forward to seeing more
Very nice, great composition, your expression sets a nice moody atmosphere. A bit more light on your face may have made this even better, perhaps with a reflector of some kind.