This could be a very deep and emotive piece with a bit better lighting. I think if you had set some lighting off to the left side of the model, the shadows would help.
I think the editing on this works pretty well, as does the expression.
I do find myself drawn more to the door than the person for some reason. I think that it may be sharper or more in focus, or maybe it just interests my eye more.
This is a good photo and I think a bit of shadows would have thrown this over the top.
My guess that you will get a lot of comments about the title!
H... thought ...
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Did you .... think ....
Seems that the background is in better focus than the person.
the door handle is nearly lost in this, and yet, I find it to be the most interesting element. I wonder if a bit of dodge work could bring it out a bit more.