Nicely caught action in this one, I'm not sure the image on the monitor has come out clear enough for me to understand the full meaning of your title though, shame. Nice office lighting effect, captured the set-up just right and those bits which are meant to be sharp are sharp. If that's a Starbucks coffee cup on the far side then it is a marginally better picture of one of those items than another one I have just commented on.
There is a fine line between a good and a bad picture. I don't know if I really like it or really don't. I keep coming back, but I fall into an undecided category. I think that while the person in the picture is distressed, the office isn't – it's far too neat and there's nothing seeming to indicate stress anywhere else in the picture – even on the computer screen. Is this a subtle but deliberate ploy - or isn't it. Technically, I think it's fine. Subject matter and content, I'm not so sure. Perhaps others will be a bit more definite. As for me, because of the uncertainty I will score it in the middle… Good luck…
OMG - who works like this? That desk is TIDY for heaven's sake! Nice motion shot. Not sure what it has to do with the challenge and there is a slight brown/orange caste - is the white balace set right? But otherwise forcus is where it should be and the composition is good.
Manipulative. Suppose the monitor shows one of your earlier submissions. The woman does not look like she's the owner of that office, probably your wife. Yes, it's an office setting but that's about the only relationship I see with the challenge. 5
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