Critique Club Review:
I'm not sure what the stream of water is supposed to represent. To the left of the cone, it looks like there is a spot or drop of water on the lens.
Color and saturation are good. The foam at the top of the volcano is just about burned out and featureless. Could just be the foam is.
Depth of field is a little shallow here. Things are getting soft towards the base of the cone.
To me it appears that you are a little too close to the cone with the camera. Also a little late with the picture. It looks like the eruption is about over.
This is a creative take on the challenge. I'd like to see this picture again with a little wider angle, more depth of field, the eruption in mid flow for a little more drama and without the stream of liquid frozen in time, it is a little distracting. |
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