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School Days: Geometry
Basic Editing III
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Doing lines...
moosemayhem
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Challenge:
School Days: Geometry
(
Basic Editing III
)
Camera:
Fujifilm FinePix S5500 Zoom
Location:
Western Park, Ponsonby, Auckland
Date:
Sep 8, 2006
Aperture:
f/5
ISO:
100
Shutter:
1/240 sec
Galleries:
Architecture
,
Black and White
Date Uploaded:
Sep 7, 2006
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My first submission... (the title refers to what I'd usually end up doing for not completing my geometry homework).
Tricky challenge but I saw some great sculptures with interesting lines/angles and here we are...
A quick crop and converted to b/w and Bob's your auntie.
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ambaker
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Canon EF 70-200mm f/2.8 L USM
09/25/2006 03:38:56 PM
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There are some nice shapes here. The lighting is a bit low, and contrast a little soft.
If this had been taken to extreme contrast where it was almost all white and all black, it would make for increased drama in the piece.
Interesting composition, and focus/depth of field are fine. Just needs more punch.
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digitalknight
Mattel Barbie Photo Designer Digital Camera
09/16/2006 03:30:38 PM
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whiter whites would give this more contrast and make it stronger IMO 6
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Germaine
Canon EOS-7D Mark II
Canon EF 24-70mm f/4.0 L IS USM Lens
09/14/2006 05:16:48 AM
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Good elements, composition, and b&w, but IMNSHO it could be sharper.
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KarenNfld
09/13/2006 08:50:39 AM
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Nice lines and curves, I like the angled composition.
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tolovemoon
Canon EOS Rebel SL1
Canon EF-S 55-250mm f/4-5.6 IS
09/13/2006 12:35:23 AM
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Not bad as abstract, but the contrasting is a bit dark and grainy with things a little flat and no texture.
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