I looked at this shot for a while. Had a mood to it that was different and enticing. Really well done - as if I would expect anything less. Great work.
the black border creates a strange effect. since it is extending the darkness, it makes him look like the top half of his head is gone, or covered. but that's a small matter. another small matter is the creases on his shirt. regardless of the cause, it makes the shirt look new which makes it seem like a "dramatization." It works against the illusion you're creating. Everything else is fine, though. You've got a moody, noirish shot with a protagonist we want to know more about(for our own safety, perhaps).
Not sure how the title fits, but I like the image. The lighting maybe is a bit strong on the cuff, but not bad to the point of taking away from the image or anything.