My friend Kitten manning the Voltaire table at Dragon*Con 2006. This is a basic editing version; the real version is much better in some subtle ways.
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the white blobs behind her are distracting, but not distracting enough to create an effect. the subject looks very good, though. the high contrast seems to suit her. 6
Kalina looks great and is standing in the perfect spot...thanks for that. But, WHAT THE HECK IS THAT IN THE BACKGROUND??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!??!??!??!?!?! HeRe's a 10...I..I.......I goTta gO....Mom...her friend is scaring me...mom...moM?......MOM!
You did a nice job of placing the girl according to the rule of thirds; however, in doing so you created a bunch of negative space behind her that fails to add to the image and even distracts from the main subject. I think you could have cropped out that doll/object in the background and still met the challenge intent with the girl's eyes fulfilling the rule of thirds requirement.
nice clear shot. interesting subject but the contrast is a little blown out leaving a large white patch on her shoulder and white on nose and cheeks.I really don't care for the background and find it distracting and kind of evil looking. a different background would have totally changed it for the better.