I would like to see a 33 and one third (on third our lives) but this is a great shot. Can wait to see what you were shooting with nice detail without the typical looking directly at camera.
This had a lot of potential. What bugs me here is that you can't see here eyes. That's the most important thing when it comes to portraits. I think she has great eyes why do you covered them with hair? You could score about 1.5 points higher IMHO. Everything else is done nicely: lighting, DOF, colors - great. Keep up your good work!