Awww, isn't this too sweet for a Judi? I gave it a 6, which is my score for a solid shot.
Technicals: Excellent focus, great lighting (are the PJ's maybe a bit on the bright side? not a biggie though). Composition is intimate. The conversion to B&W is reasonable. Perhaps a bit on the low-contrast side, but that might be what is called for considering the subject.
The feel: Captures a nice moment, although it would obviously mean more to those who know the subjects. In this regard it is perhaps a bit of a cliche shot for those with no emotional involvement.
The game: You know what you are doing Judi. It's a solid shot and one I bet daddy will treasure, but for DPC lacks "wow" and all that jazz...