Good lighting here, well maybe a bit bright but at least it is soft. I like the glint in the stuffed animal's eye and the nightlight in the background.
Beautiful colors. The flash lines didn't get in the way either. I resized the window and this would be great with a crop just above her ear and on the right just into her hair. I like the door and nightlight, but would have taken it standing back a few more feet to get more of the doorway. It's hard to see right now and the dark line is distracting.
Wonderful composition. Perfect DOF. The nightlite really helps tell the story. Dimmer lighting would help this along, I think. A bit too harshly lit . Very nice shot though.
//www.dpchallenge.com/forum.php?action=read&FORUM_THREAD_ID=45881 - this thread (the first post), if read in its entirety, should give you something to think about :)