I would have liked to see more color on this. I love the one point perspective. You have red on the fellas cart in the front and the person further down the pier has red pants, its confusing on which is the subject.
If it is the guy closest to the camera, he is on the 1/3rd plane vertically but not horizontally. If it is the two at the further end of the pier, they are in the right position. But they are so small on the image that makes you think its the guy with the cart. The leading lines of the pier bring you back to the two at the end. I think you get the idea. Eenie meenie miney mo... |