Nice lighting mostly. Something about her face really creeps me out. I mean she is nice looking, but looks like some post was done to softer/clean her face? and that look is just really... chivers...
Very nice lighting on this shot. Lovely model. I really like the pose, a very interesting, alluring curve. Her facial expression looks like she is slightly uncomfortable, or not at ease, but still a very nice shot.
Composition: 8 - Bit too much space at the top imo, but other than that, great!
Technical: 9 - Perfect exposure, perfect processing, perfect lighting. The only thing that bothers me a bit is the few yellowy patches around the shoulder. A localized hue/sat adjustment should help :)
Creativity: 8 - Nice dynamic pose makes it more than just a normal portrait shot.
Appeal: 10 - The great photo along with the attractive model gives this top marks for appeal :)
really pretty girl who has been well lit and, erm, nicely flattered from the choice of clothing (which eyes are inevitably drawn too... :)). i'm not too keen on the oppressively black and dead feeling background though, but that's generally a complaint i have with black backgrounds in portraits because it kind of detaches your subject in terms of her personality. impression wise, she also seems good natured, which again doesn't suit the background. her posture is a little weird too, feeling a bit unnatural... overall the shot is visually appealing, though i feel the picture is a bit too conventional to do your model justice. 6.