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09/07/2006 09:15:15 PMPost actions
Great lighting, wish the focus was a little sharper on her but really like the composition and lighting!
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09/07/2006 06:03:11 AMPost actions
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09/06/2006 11:23:43 PMPost actions
Wonderful lighting. Love the expression on this girl and the body position. Good use of the simple background. The border really enhances the shot.
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09/06/2006 10:46:05 AMPost actions
her face, though highly expressive, is ambiguous. she could be afraid, or sad, or just anxious. I see this as a metaphor for growing up, skating into the unknown. That's why it is appropriate that there is so much space in front of her, and it's "blacked out" by that curtain. 10
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09/05/2006 11:03:22 PMPost actions
very intersting...i couldn't do that!!! i am not talented enough! 8
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09/05/2006 04:14:25 AMPost actions
Great perspective and what really makes this for me is where her eyes are looking. Well done!
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09/04/2006 02:13:25 PMPost actions
Composition matches her expression and pose. Background is mildly distracting.
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09/02/2006 04:02:30 PMPost actions
cute but kinda OOF. nice border.5
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09/02/2006 01:08:16 PMPost actions
I'd like it better with a more active pose - a stop motion while skating, or a pose that made it look that way.
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09/01/2006 04:30:02 PMPost actions
This one really captured my attention. That look is priceless.
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09/01/2006 03:33:56 PMPost actions
I can't figure out how you have managed the lighting here but it looks great.
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09/01/2006 01:13:55 PMPost actions
Great facial expression. I wish the title gave some hint as to the story behind the look.
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09/01/2006 12:58:32 PMPost actions
LOOKS A LITTLE FLAT. TRY INCREASEING THE CONTRAST AND MAYBE A LITTLE SATURATION.
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09/01/2006 11:45:26 AMPost actions
Composition: 6 - Nice composition but I think there's just slightly too much empty space on the right.
Technical: 5 - Could do with a small application of USM to sharpen it slightly, and a small levels adjustment to stop it looking quite so 'washed out' imo.
Creativity: 6 - I like how she's looking out of the frame, making us wonder what has caught her attention.
Appeal: 5
Overall Calculated Average Score: 5
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09/01/2006 01:39:03 AMPost actions
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