I quite like this. The thing thats not cutting it for me is the guy on the right. His pose is very uncool and he doesn´t look nearly as "hard" as the other guy. Loose that guy and this is an 7 from me.
I think this scene would be much stronger with the hooded figure and the dog, but cropping out the guy on the right. I just don't like his pose, and his profile doesn't really sell the "hoodlum" look to me. I like the bright background, and it fits the them very well.
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