Interesting how you framed this in the grid, how it hides the toplessness (cool word for scrable), the hand reaching out to it and the other hand also at the edge of the grid -> gives a bit of a twisted sense of scale.
Saw some of the other shots from this shoot in your galleries. The one where Olga sits at the end on the chair with the reflection in the water and the one where you shoot from above along the pole (in b&w) are very good too.
This is a great location and great POV - I think the model needs to be more prominent or something. It's as if I wonder why she's half nude - and what is her expression exactly ... hopfully this makes sense. The shadow and water on the floor are quite interesting too. I guess this needs to be viewed bigger the way it is composed is wht I am saying. 7
I wish I could see the model's right arm and hand better. Kind of a weird angle for the arm to be. I'd like a tighter crop of the model. All that said, this is a VERY well done and thought out picture. Love the processing and color tones. Great location.
the most seductive motivational poster I've ever seen.
I find myself wondering if this is a photo of a re-bar grid or of a beautiful woman. My eye WANTS to see the woman (of course) but the composition shows me you liked the re-bar better.
All that means I would prefer a tighter crop.
One of the more creative shots I've seen in this challenge. Thank you for that!
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