Critique Club Review:
I'm not sure what this is, but many purists would call it a subject. You have a couple of objects competing for attention. The massive object wins, and the light pole jutting in from the top winds up as a distraction. Part of the low scores could also come from so much dark area in the picture, with a featureless sky as a background. The picture does have almost a monochromatic feel, which I like, and which could be played up, perhaps with a bit different shapes. |