What is that in front of her face? I think this photo would have been much better had her face not been cut off, also there seems to be a green overcast to the entire picture that is a little distracting.
Interesting choice of crop, but it's a little distracting to me - I would have liked to have seen her full head of hair on the carpet instead of the out of focus forgreound.
This could have been more interesting if cropped or compsed diffrently. The eye searches for either feet or the top of the head, which are both absent. Also the items on the floor to the right of the subject are quite distracting. Nice lighting but over exposed near the bottom and top. I would also suggest a shirt without any words or images since people will focus on that instead of the image as a whole.