This strikes me as a travel snapshot - the lighting's flat, the bird's not the clear subject (I think the buildings are more interesting), and it's somewhat out of focus. On top of that, it bears no connection to mystery or magic for me. Am I missing some cultural connection to peacocks? 3.
Unfortunately this doesn't portray magic or mystery in my opinion, nor is it a particularly good photo. Keep your chin up...criticism is hard to take. :)
Hmm, the exotic look is good. The blown sky and relatively low contrast of the background isn't. Doesn't invoke a great amount of M&M to me, but I wouldn't call it DNMC. 5.