Composition: 8 - Very nice composition, puts the focus firmly on the eyes . The only thing I'd change is to crop a little lower at the top so that the top of the frame wasnt the same point at which the hairline is.
Technical: 7 - Lovely soft DoF, and great focus on the eyes. Fantastic colours! The skin tones seem a bit blotchy though, maybe I would have tried to even them up a little in post processing.
Creativity: 7 - Different from other portraits simply due to the variety of strong colours in the eyes and the kind glancing look, which makes it seem spontanious and even better :)
Appeal: 7
Interesting eyes. Are they normally green or is this PS or maybe contacts? Regardless, very beautiful. Wish her bottom liip was a little bit softer to match the rest of her face, but still I like this shot a lot.