Challenge:Fire II (Advanced Editing IV) Camera:Sony DSC-F717 Location: Home Date: Aug 10, 2006 Aperture: F/2.8 ISO: 100 Shutter: 2 Sec Date Uploaded: Aug 13, 2006
regrettably, it's far too blurry. and even though it has a nice grain, it (paradoxically) looks like the noise reduction has been overdone... it's a weird mix of processing, really. it's a great concept, though. 4.
Nice unique concept! If the model could have been still it might have worked. I would suggest having a third person run the light painting so the model can remain still.
I like the idea, but difficult to do and have the model stay still enough to avoid motion blur. You might want to consider having the model stay still while someone else traces the heart or maybe adding a burst of rear curtain flash to help provide better definition in the model.
cute but the connection to the challenge seesm subtle at best and the woman would have much more impact if she were less blurry. I do like the addition of the border and your composition though.