Greets from the Critique Club
I guess I don't really see this as being stupid. I'm sure if I was there, I'd think it was.
To make this photo better, I would like to see the subjects looking toward the camera instead of off to the right like they are.
Also, I find the people in the background to be a bit distracting. This has a big snapshot feel to it.
The colors are pretty good, but I'd like to see the whites be really white.
Hope this helps you in some way.
--Mike
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