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I think this is a cute idea and you've got some great technical aspects to it. Focus looks wonderful to me, use of natural light looks great too. My biggest fuss is with the composition though. With the title, I'm thinking the image needs a bit more of an ambience for the background - something that ties it even more firmly to a kid but also to a kid acting as though it were truly their 'wheels'. Thus, I'm thinking a background with a jungle gym or sandbox would further the story by highlighting just where a kid might roll. That said, the current background is far from horrible, it does work here but the overall effect for me is "oh a kids toy in a backyard" as nothing is here to energize my imagination. I gave a 4 |
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