Very clear, good action shot. It bothers me that the girl who is in focus has her back to you, but it's not terrible. I like the determination on the girl who is looking straight at the camera's face. I almost wish she was in focus and the girl with the ball was a little blurry, might have made for a pretty interesting shot. Field hockey is fun to shoot though :-) Nicely done.
good freeze on the action - need face(s) in focus - good exposure for tonal range from white to very dark, tough shot shows photographer has experience
It's a little dark, but it captures the anticipation of action very well. The image is very clear, the focus is great, and I have to admit that the little cloud of dust near her foot and by the ball really makes the photo. Very nicely captured.
Nicely done! A couple suggestions -- First, I may have tried lightening up the midtones just a little bit. It seems like the girls' heads get a little lost in the background. I may have also cropped it just a little tighter -- the people in the background don't really add a lot to the moment. Still a nice job, though!
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