I understand (I think) what you are trying to show here, but the hairs really detract from this. I would also would have liked to see a slightly larger DOF.
My favorite thing to call people, just kidding. Skin has a wonderful texture, the depth of field on this shot is a little too shallow for my liking. It would of been much better if the entire subject was in focus.
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Or in Mandarin 'nai tou' and it Hakken it's 'ni tau':) Good texture shot. Might be a little overexposed. I think you could have given it 1/2 stop less and it would have had more density.
Ooooooh! Fairly risque for this place....but I LIKE it! This is a good example of texture....might have been even better if you had used blue body paint! :)~ I AM serious about that. I do have a suggestion - try to work on the depth issues with focus. Good marks for originality!
the left side and the top of the nipple are too blurry, you should try and get everything in focus. and yes, i know that's tough with macros, but necessary for these kind of shots. the hairs are very distracting, and so are the dark specs below and to the right of the nipple that look like dirt. -- gr8photos (2)
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