Nice shot and nice color tones. For some reason the ring is a distraction. I think I would have preferred her lips free of jewelry. Not that I am against piercings (I have several myself) just think it would have been a bit cleaner. Nice work though and bumping up one.
I like the top half of the picture quite well - very good exposure on her hair and just the peek of the eyelash and nose. Below that, though, I don't like the change in tone/texture/color of her skin and the lip ring (?) looks like she has a split lip, probably due to the reflection.
I don't know if this is Zen "style" or not, and I don't really care for the "style" for this photo. This is simply amazing capture of beauty complimented by great post-processing. I love the idea of partial face hidden as it leave some part to see and other to imagination. A dash of metal highlighes the softness of rest of the image (is this Zen?). Hope this does well for you. Adding to my favs.9.