Hard to get these fluffy flowers into focus.... but they do need to be sharper. The rock ledge (?) in the top right corner needs to be eliminated or included more to be part of the subject.
I like the texture and composition of your photo, but the fact that the right side of the bush is out of focus doesn't help the quality of it. Also, I notice that the file size of your entry is only 92k. There are significant sharpness problems caused by over compressing. Try to use the whole 150k we are allowed to use and you will see a difference in sharpness, especially in the fine detail like the flowers.
The angle you have framed this with gives it some interest that it normally wouldn't have. It seems a little flat to me. Maybe some saturation, or contrasting, if possible would help. karamt
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your title implies that you may have chosen this soft focus deliberately. did you? for me, personally, it doesn't work. i would like to see more of the plants in focus. maybe (depending on what is to the right) to even take a shot further to the right so the plants in the left don't poke into the shot in the LL corner) and more of the leachen (sp?) texture in the UR corner to contrast the softness. just my 2cents. -- gr8photos (3)
tighter focus would be good, and the log or branch in the top right corner and the flower in the bottom left are distracting tangent, but the overall idea is good
interesting texture... i don't particularly care for the downward view though... it also looks like some parts of the subject did not remain in focus.. = 5 - jmsetzler
This is lovely and has great texture. The composition is quite good, but I think that the out of focus foreground takes a bit away from an otherwise excellent photo.
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