Greetings from the Critique Club,
Hi Claire,
I've spent some time looking at your shot trying to work out what I can comment on it. For soem reason this isn't easy. The shot is technically sound - nothing wrong there. Even the general composition is okay - admitabely a little full of clutter, but given the challenge that is to be expected.
The issue I think is to do with what the lines of the steel convey in terms of emotion and leading the eye. Somehow these factors just don't 'work' here. I have found the following article very useful in starting to understand this aspect of photography. Hope it helps you too.
//ronbigelow.com/articles/adv_comp/adv_comp.htm
I hope my comments help and Good Luck in future Challenges!
Cheers
Paul |
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