Thanks for the comments everyone. This was my first submission and I wasn't sure how it would go. Like a few of the comments suggested, I would like to have had it "pop" more also. I wanted to give more emphasis on the broken egg but was not sure how to go about it. Any suggestions would be welcome. Regarding the raw egg question, I actually used a raw egg (not hard boiled). I poked a hole in the end of the egg to drain out all the liquids before crushing it. Not sure why, just thought it'd be neat.
This is one of my favorites (I only scored 5 photos higher than an 8). However, I think you could have tweaked it in post to make it "pop" (for lack of a better word). 9