I haven't looked at the comments, but I bet a large part of your problem was meeting the challenge. For a picture that is supposed to be B&W, there is an awful lot of yellow in those rings.
The idea is creative and I like that. The picture is very centered which leads to a static feel. Also, the DOF doesn't help us. I would have increased it enough to make the whole ring in focus rather than having the back portion OOF. Or, if you wanted a shallow DOF, I would have focused on the back portion rather than the front because it stands out more than the front which gets a bit lost in the foil. |