Nice framin and motive. But with "Bring me a dream" I suggested a warm colour for the pic. The grey tone is very hard. Have you tried to take a shot with a sharp needle? I believe it would be better, than the viewer couln't the LP title and have a dream about his personal music (dream). Perhaps. So only 5
Great idea. You'd have gotten my 10 for this challenge if this was a bit more focused throughout. The label in focus but my eye is blocked by the (out of focus) needle.
It took me some time to figure out what I was looking at. The arm and needle should be sharper and the label could use some contrast so I could see the words better. Nice idea, nice angle to the shot, DOF needs work.