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07/25/2006 10:09:25 PMPost actions
I like the lines. But would have looked better if the crayola markers should either be every, or all the same direction.
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07/20/2006 08:59:53 PMPost actions
I wonder what this would have looked like with more pronounced shadows ( off the markers ). Good concept.
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07/20/2006 03:05:06 PMPost actions
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07/20/2006 12:59:16 PMPost actions
It would be even better in my opinion if all the markers were facing the camera on the same side (i.e. either with or without the logo).
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07/20/2006 04:28:23 AMPost actions
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07/20/2006 01:37:13 AMPost actions
Needs either more contrast (really push it), or less blown out. It hits a middling ground that doesn't quite work.
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07/19/2006 08:05:41 PMPost actions
Nice concept and nice angle. It's too bad the markers weren't all facing the same way. It might have enhanced the visual rhythm.
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07/19/2006 11:21:38 AMPost actions
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07/19/2006 10:31:51 AMPost actions
The amount of white is almost overwhelming to my eye.
I do like the boldness of color.
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07/19/2006 08:43:24 AMPost actions
lighting and focus need improvement here,,,to pull off a shot like this, you need to make sure all of the pens are perfect...the last two are skewed here...also it is obvious you drew the lines then leant the pens against something...good effort, points for effort here...
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