Good idea, but hasn't quite worked in execution. The central composition is, frankly, very boring and I can't really see the point of having used a lime and a kiwi. The idea of the coloured straws for the background was a brilliant one, and it works well, although I might have been inclined to line up the bendy bits as they are a bit distracting being all over the place. This would be worth a reshoot playing with different compositions.
I love the use of the colorful straws. Almost don't need the lime slice as the kiwi is beautiful on its own. I'd have probably cropped the white top a bit. 7
I am so picky... I love the color in this. However, I wish the pattern in the straws was consistent. I tend to prefer something harder to identify in an abstract-related challenge but the focus and color are pretty darn good. 7
abstract: Having an intellectual and affective artistic content that depends solely on intrinsic form rather than on narrative content or pictorial representation
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