---Greetings from the Critique Club!---
First impression - Neat idea with the DNA!
This shot is a good idea that could have used some more pre-shot prep. With the totally white background there is no context. I don't have any specific suggestions for the background, I just think it would have been better with one, although more difficult for sure.
I would also suggest making the ketchup more red. This challenge used the Advance Editing rules. You could have done a lot to make the ketchup redder. When I first saw the image I though the ketchup was actually pretzels.
Keep thinking up these clever ideas!
I hope this was helpful. Feel free to contact if you have and question!
David
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