Challenge:Lines II (Basic Editing III) Camera:Sony DSC-S90 Location: My roof, My home Date: Jul 12, 2006 Aperture: f/2.8 ISO: 80 Shutter: 1/40 Galleries:Still Life Date Uploaded: Jul 13, 2006
This has an unusual feeling and mood in this image, almost looks antique like. I really like that effect. I think this is one of your stronger images, so well done. All that you need to do to make this image pop more, is to turn the composition at right angles, to make it look like it is going up, like the title says.
Urfa,
Thanks for your coment on my Beach entry and I thought I would return the favor. I think this has some really strong lines and is a cool find. A suggestion right off the top is to have your photo be a larger file size. The max allowable is 150 kb and your is 58 kb. This means you could have had hearly three times the smoothness in edges and details. I notice this is one ting that can keep a score down abit. Here is a link to he photoshop tutorial on this site for submitting photos for challenges. But I thikn you had a used a good perspective and like the wide angle feel. Thanks again.
joe
Great angle but I would prefer focus on first round part of wood than bit lower. Also bit yellowish tint on wood and at top of picture is not really my taste.
Is it a ladder for someone with one leg shorter than the other?
I like the desat, and the texture of the wood against the floor and wall, but I wish the DOF was deeper.
This is a really great photo with a lot of potential. Personally, I would have converted to b/w because the color is so subtle that it almost distracts. I would have sharpened it a bit more, too, because the image appers too soft. The composition is strong and I like the point of view, I just feel this is lacking in the post-processing area.
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