I think this would've been more effective without the barrier in the background, for example if you would've stood a bit to the left (not always possible, I realize). I wonder how it would be without the pole also, such as right up close to the sign, with just a bit of dirt and pavement to make your point.
Looks like they're trying to put in some sort of walkway? Meets challenge, but the composition isn't particularly interesting. The blue barricade things compete with the vertical sign and pole for attention, and the viewer isn't exactly sure what the subject is or should be.
I see what you were aiming for with the 'progress' theme, but i just don't think really shows it that well, by that imean it's not an interesting photo to me.
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