I didn't vote on this challenge but since you requested comments I'll give you my 2 cents.
It seems like a snapshot, which often isn't voted well in challenges. I'd second the comments made about his hand in his face, it doesn't look right.
Here's how I would have voted it:
Meets Challenge 1/1
Technical 1/3
Aesthetics 0/1
Composition 1/3
Creativeness/Wow factor 0/2
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