Looks like dead time. Anyway, I know you were trying to capture the perspective of the fingers and the shadow, but the person is unnaturally positioned. On the back may have seemed a better choice. As to the use of the light on the fingers, that was very solid and strong.
The perspective and lighting in this image are very dramatic. The background almost looks like the child is outdoors, while at the same time the child appears to be lying on carpet indoors. I’m giving this a healthy bump since I came back to comment, as I do believe the child fell asleep indoors and you captured your intent as well as you possibly could without waking the little one.