I am not really all that fond of the bar that is over her hand leading to the look like she has a brown mark on her hand, just something that really put“s me off this shot. Not really crazy about the composition either, think that all that room over her head is abundant. Like the lighting though and clarity.
Hmm... well done, I love it and hate it at the same time. I think the thing I love is your model's expression. I hate the bar across her head, overall great pic!!!7
This shot would be much better if taken from a slightly lower and to the left. The top of the rail is obstructing part of her hat and the vertical bar is touching her face. It would frame her more niceley if the camera position were adjusted a little.