Good effort and idea. Either too despeckled or not sharpened enough - or equivalent. I played with this in photoshop. Recropped to eliminate the E-F-R symbol, sharpened, and saturated the blue some more. Played with the rotation too - sort made it interesting in a vertical - sort of the unexpected.
Good color and focus. The white line gives some movement to the picture as well. It just seems a little flat to me. Maybe a different perspective would do something. karmat
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For those that are just learning, like me.
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looks completely flat to me. maybe different lighting could have improved the textured impression. apart from that, less jpeg compression would probably have helped the picture quality, too. 4 beegee
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