This is exactly what happens when I try Origami, I always end up with a lot of trash and an airplane!
Thanks everyone for the comments and votes, I got the idea for this photo with about 90 minutes to go before the challange dead line so I quickly tried about 3 setups took the photos and did a very rough edit. I was surprised the photo did a lot better than I thought it would!
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A little too busy. I can't tell whether I should look at the book, the plane, the piece on the left, or the jumble at the top. All of the colors and shapes draw my attention.
Try to pick one subject and get rid of everything that doesn't focus attention on it.